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Post by allxdeadx on Feb 20, 2007 11:50:26 GMT -5
i dnt why bt i always cwy to cemetry drive...hmmm.... bt theres many mcr songs i cwy too.... ;D nyone else?? or am i just cwazy?? pwease tell me ;D
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Post by The amazing DEATHONASTICK© on Feb 20, 2007 12:04:57 GMT -5
Welllllllll if you insist... He finally stood and looked around. More memories stabbed like knives through his heart. He grabbed hi coat and walked out. The sun was just rising. No birds sung. The air was cold and the sky dim and gray. No sound. Like everything was in mourning. He walked slowly toward the cemetery, his feet dragging. Too depressed to make an effort to lift. He went to the mausoleum and threw him self down by the empty beer bottles. "How could you do this to me?" He rasped. "I would've saved you from him.. I could've made you happy. I hate you. I HATE YOU!" He moaned. Yelling hurt his throat. He wondered if he had made it bleed. He took her beer bottle and flung it at the fence, then left for her place. He stood outside her window. All along her house was yellow police tape. Like this was a murder scene. He went under it and rang the door bell. No one replied. He opened the door and went in. There was no light other than the one in the bathroom. He made his way into the room and stared down at her corpse. Her dark blond hair was matted and covered in blood. The gun remained in her hand. He noted that she was wearing the dress and almost smiled. He couldn't look at her face. It was a bloody mess. For God's sake, some of it was missing. He bent down and took her hand. It was so cold. So stiff. So dead. A note fell from it onto the floor. He picked it up and saw his name written on it in her hand writing. He shoved it in his pocket and stood up straight. "Goodbye, Beautiful." He murmered. More tears threatened to spill and he turned away. "I love you." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Almost there. Yeah.. I killed her. Sowy! ;D
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Post by The amazing DEATHONASTICK© on Feb 20, 2007 12:06:10 GMT -5
I cry to cemetery drive cuz this is what I pictured when I listened to it. So I put it on paper and then on computer.
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Post by allxdeadx on Feb 20, 2007 12:10:13 GMT -5
;D aww the last part is sooo sweet.. poor Gee, all alone nw ;'(
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Post by The amazing DEATHONASTICK© on Feb 20, 2007 12:42:04 GMT -5
Yeah.. The end is sad.... Yes. Even more depressing parts.
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I rock
??? Life Is But A Dream For The Dead ??? Mikey_Way_Is_Love ???
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Post by blackxheart on Feb 20, 2007 13:14:30 GMT -5
Awwww I love your fanfic ;D And even though you killed her *tuts* it cheered me up hehe And I danced like a strawberry anyway And I sometimes cwy to that song, and your fanfic made me go all puffy hehe
More? Pwease *puppy face* YOU CANT RESIST THE PUPPY FACE!
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Post by Zombii Junkie SixSick6 on Feb 20, 2007 17:49:18 GMT -5
OMG! THAT"S SO SAD!! I'm listening to a funny song and i got a little teary eyed again! SHEEZ KID! Write more or i'll die omg!!! Me likeys it, writeys more!
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Post by The amazing DEATHONASTICK© on Feb 20, 2007 19:08:15 GMT -5
Yay teary eyed..ness! That means I'm doing my job.. Since we're coming so close to the end of mine and it'll be a bitch to think up another one.. I'm gonna suspend it for a while. *Evil smile*
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Post by Zombii Junkie SixSick6 on Feb 20, 2007 19:12:24 GMT -5
AHHH NO!!! YOU EVIL LITTLE TROLL! lol omg! i know i'm a loser! okay.... you can't do that or i'll die! lol really!
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Post by The amazing DEATHONASTICK© on Feb 20, 2007 19:14:30 GMT -5
No you can't die! That's not fair cuz then you'll NEVER read the end and you're ghost will never get any rest!So ur just gonna have to live for a couple days or if I get really tired of waiting to post more.
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Post by gerardwayfan13 on Feb 20, 2007 19:33:44 GMT -5
;D Don't know why I'm smiling I am sad ha ha ha.
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Post by The amazing DEATHONASTICK© on Feb 20, 2007 19:47:29 GMT -5
That's happened to me before.. I was pretty much unable to quit laughing even though I was devastated. Although this is a completly different situation, hee!
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Post by gerardwayfan13 on Feb 20, 2007 21:18:13 GMT -5
;D Yes yes way different. I wonce fell down a flight of about 27 cement stairs at my church and I was like falling head first on my ribs "I should have borken a bone' But instead I hit my arm so hard and I was like WOW!!! And people were like are you ok. I was like DUDE THAT WAS AWSOME!!!!! I so could not stop laughin they probably thought I was crazy. Cause that so should have been crying my eyes out. I ALMOST WANTED TO GET A CARPET OR SOMETHING AND DO IT AGAIN!!!! I almost did. Then about an hour later i was like MAN THAT HURT!!!!And I started crying. So yeah I like have messed up emotions I gues ha ha ha!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! ::
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Post by Zombii Junkie SixSick6 on Feb 21, 2007 16:56:15 GMT -5
FAN-TASMIC! lol wow.
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Post by gerardwayfan13 on Feb 21, 2007 21:20:53 GMT -5
I like this story. ;D
Falling down stairs is fun!!!
RANDOMNESS ROCKS!!!!
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