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Post by Ali on Jul 24, 2007 11:07:20 GMT -5
More story pleeeeeaaassseeee
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Post by Zombii Junkie SixSick6 on Aug 13, 2007 8:44:24 GMT -5
*Gerard's POV* "I can't stand that asshole!" I said furiously to Ray. "Gerard, calm down. If you punch him again, he'll probably be a little bitch about it and call the cops." Ray told him. "If he thinks he can just come in here and move in on MY JEZA, he's fucking WRONG!" I exclaimed positively fuming with anger, pounding my fist on one of the counters in the back. "Gerard!" Ray said harshly, "calm down. She knows he's an asshole! She's not stupid! She won't fall for him! I promise." "You think?" I asked insecurely. "I know." Ray replied. "I just don't want him anywhere near her. I don't want anyone in the way of my being with her. I want to be with her so bad, Ray. I want to be her everything. I have since I don't know when. She means-" "Everything to you, I know, Gerard. You can't let that asshole get to you." Ray told me. "I'd give anything for her to love me." I sighed, shaking my head as I looked to the floor. "Are you calm now?" Ray asked, I nodded solemnly, "Then go back out there with Bob, and sit down. Let them talk for a bit, then get back in her life, Talk more, she won't respond to you if you keep staying silent." Ray advised. "She's just…." I paused, trying to think of the reason I couldn't exactly get the courage to talk to her when everyone was around, but I could when we were just together, "I don't want to say anything wrong." "You won't." Ray told me, "You're a pretty smooth talker in my book. Even Frank thinks so." He laughed. "I'm so afraid that I'll do something stupid and lose her." I told him. "Stop being so damn insecure, now look, she's walking away from him, and back here, take these fries and go out to meet her." Ray told me, shoving the basket of fries in my hands, and sending me out.
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Post by Ali on Aug 13, 2007 9:12:17 GMT -5
now, that was short! But you made up for it with the very long DB&BP chapter XD
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lucy
i suck..
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Post by lucy on Sept 4, 2007 9:08:39 GMT -5
New reader! I love this story, update soon!?
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Post by Ali on Sept 4, 2007 10:19:11 GMT -5
I think she left this forum o.O She promissed me she'd finish this story, though...
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lucy
i suck..
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Post by lucy on Sept 4, 2007 13:29:20 GMT -5
ok, well let me know if she finishes the story. and if she does please let me know were to find it, because im pretty much dying to know whats going to happen!
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Post by Ali on Sept 4, 2007 13:31:59 GMT -5
will do.. The story'll be right here if she does indeed finish it ( I hope she does, I love it XD )
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