Post by gerardismyvenom on Dec 28, 2006 0:13:19 GMT -5
Fucked up day...Fucked up week...Fucked up life...DAMN!!!
this took so long to write.....most of the first chapter is dialogue....that'll change probably....I think....I finally got it done though....I hope you all like it so here it goes...
I don't own MCR, Eyeball Records or anything in this chapter...the only characters I own in this chapter are the following: Laureileigh, Kate, Mr. Danvers....and maybe a few others.....I don't own anyone involved to MCR and if any of the names I use are the same they are completely accidental and nothing but a coincidence......I am using the guys of
MCR for the purpose of this story which is an MCR fanfic that I have written down on paper because I got the ideas straight from my own head....if any one of you readers steals this from me and I find out (which I will) there will be sever consequences and punishments.....if you wish to show/post this elsewhere....PLEASE ASK ME FIRST!!!! I would like everybody's feedback on this....whether it's a good comment or a bad comment....it's called constructive criticism and I love constructive criticism.....thanks again....now you may enjoy this wonderful creation from my crazy brain...
Rated: PG-13 for language
Chapter 1
*flashback*
"BLOODY HELL!", I say as I realize I've left my apartment key on my nightstand again, "That's the fourth time this week." I pull out my cell phone and dial Kate's number; pushing the green button I pray silently to myself she's home and not sleeping. One ring...two rings...'Please pick up Kate!', I say to myself...three ring...'Damn it answer your phone!' The fourth ring is cut short and I hear Kate say,
Kate: "Hey Laureileigh. What's up?"
Laureileigh: "Thank God your home Kate! Please come downstairs and let me in?! Its pouring rain and I've forgotten my damn key again!"
Kate: "Good God Laureileigh...not again! That's the fourth time this week!"
Laureileigh: "I KNOW! Now come let me in!"
I hang up on her. I see her coming down the stairs. 'Thank God for Kate!', I say to myself. She opens the door...holds it open for me and says,
Kate: "This is the last fucking time Laur!"
Laureileigh: "You said that the last time Kate. Do you really expect me to believe you?!"
Kate: "No I don't! I'm just hoping you won't forget your key again!"
Laureileigh: "What would I do with out you Kate?"
Kate: "Probably die from something unnatural."
Laureileigh: *sarcastic* "Ha ha, very funny!
Kate: "I was being serious!"
Laureileigh: "I know you were...that's why I was being sarcastic!"
Kate: "Bad day at work?"
Laureileigh: "Unbelievable!!"
Kate: "What happened?"
Laureileigh: " What didn't happen?!"
Kate: "That bad, huh?"
Laureileigh: " Why the hell did I become an accountant?!"
Kate: "I really don't know. Where are you working tomorrow?"
Laureileigh: "The radio station.........why?"
Kate: "No reason, I was just wondering."
Laureileigh: "LIAR!"
Kate: "Really...I just wanted to know."
Laureileigh: "Sure you were."
Kate: "Why do you think I'm lying?!"
Laureileigh: "Because you ask me the same thing every week, and I tell you the same thing every time!"
Kate: "I do not!"
Laureileigh: "Yes...you do! Every week its, "When are you working at the radio station?", and, "Please can I come with you this time!?", and I give you the same answer I give you now...NO!"
Kate: "I don't ask EVERY week."
Laureileigh: "You might as well."
Kate: "Please Laur? Please?"
Laureileigh: "No Kate!"
Kate: "C'mon Laur, you promised me you'd take me at least once, and I still have yet to even see the parking lot!"
Laureileigh: "God damn it Kate, no!"
Kate: "Laureileigh!"
Laureileigh: 'Great now she's whining!', "No Kate! End of story!"
Kate: "But Rei!"
Laureileigh: 'Not the nickname....anything but my nickname!', "Kate...NO! Don't bring nicknames into this 'cause it’s not going to work!"
Kate: "Rei-Rei...you promised!"
Laureileigh: "K-Kay...I don't care what I promised....your not going!"
I get the spare key from under my "Welcome" mat and unlock my door. I go inside and unfortunately Kate follows me. 'If looks could kill I'd be dead now!', I think to myself.
Laureileigh: "Kate, you know I love you like a sister but I can't just bring you with me unannounced. My boss would kill me. You know how he is."
Kate: "So....call him and ask him. I mean he said he owes you for taking all those extra shifts last month. Not to mention all the summer concert shows he's asked you to do this summer. I mean that's three months away from the office and Eyeball Records!"
Laureileigh: "Yeah well he's paying me triple what I make doing all three jobs in a month. I'll be able to pay the next two years of rent for this apartment. Plus, my car payments for the next year and a half.
Good God Kate I can't ask for anything better than having a roof over my head, and something to get back and forth to work. Not to mention all the fun I'll have at the concerts and all the bands I'll meet."
Kate: "Please Laureileigh?! I'll never ask for another favor for as long as we're alive!"
Laureileigh: 'Oh great the puppy face...I'm a sucker for the puppy face...especially Kate's!', "Fine Kate I'll talk to him! I'll ask...I'll beg...I'll plead with the man.....but only if you'll........." Ring...ring. '...Damn! Who the hell would be calling me at 2 Am.', "Hang on one sec Kate?!"
I leave Kate standing in the kitchen and go into my bedroom to answer my phone.
Laureileigh: 'Damn! Speak of the devil! Why oh why did I look at the caller ID...Now I have to pick it up.'
So I pick it up...sure enough it’s my boss from the radio station.
Laureileigh: "Hello....Yeah this is Laureileigh...Oh hello Mr. Danvers....No, I just got in sir.....Oh don't worry sir I'll be there tomorrow afternoon like always....I'll be fine sir...So what did you call for sir....Yeah I could come in, in the morning...10
o'clock....No that wouldn't be a problem sir....I'll be there a little early as usual sir....No really...Its my pleasure sir....Well actually I do have a favor to ask of you sir...If you don't mind could I bring my friend Kate to the station sometime?...Really!....Thank you sir...Oh she'll behave sir, I promise...Yes sir...Goodnight to you too
Mr. Danvers." 'Thank God that's over with!' "HEY KATE!?", I yell to her and as I figured she comes bounding down the hall.
Kate: "WHAT?", she hollers back while running to my room.
Laureileigh: "I got a surprise for you!", I say to her as she appears in my bedroom doorway.
Kate: "Oooo! Oooo! I love surprises! What is it? Who was that on the phone? ....Tell me! ...TELL ME!!
Laureileigh: "Chill Kate! Good Lord calm down so I can tell you....geez!"
Kate: "Well tell me already!"
Laureileigh: "Fine....That was Mr. Danvers...."
Kate: "Well what did he want?"
Laureileigh: "He asked me to come and interview some band tomorrow morning at 10..."
Kate: "...That's it! That's what the surprise is....That you have to go in early tomorrow to interview some stupid band... That's the reason I ran all the way down the hall...."
Laureileigh: "Kate?!"
Kate: "Yeah?!"
Laureileigh: "SHUT UP FOR ONE SECOND, WILL YOU!!!"
Kate: "Oops sorry Laur."
Laureileigh: "Thank you...I wasn't finished.....I asked him if I could bring you along to the station sometime and he said, "Why not bring her with you tomorrow and let her help with the interview!", I told him thank you and that I'd ask you so...What are you doing around 10 o'clock in the morning?"
Kate: "Oh my God! Absolutely nothing! ...So hell yeah
I'm going with you!!"
Laureileigh: "Just kidding! He said there's no way in
hell he'd ever let me bring you!"
Kate: "Now you're the one who's lying!"
Laureileigh: "No I'm not...he said no! Sorry Kate."
Kate: "What the hell did you go and get my hopes up for!?"
Kate just keeps on going on about how I'm such a bitch and how I should start being a better friend when all the time I'm thinking to myself how dumb she is and I'm trying not to laugh.
Laureileigh: 'Okay this is too funny! God damn, she's so gullible! Damn it I'm going to laugh. Shit I can't stay silent anymore!'
I start laughing. I'm laughing so hard my face is red and I know it.
Kate: "WHY THE HELL ARE YOU LAUGHING LAUREILEIGH! ITS
NOT FUNNY!"
The look on her face makes me laugh harder. Then all of a sudden I start feeling light-headed. 'Shit!', Is all I can think, 'I'm going to die laughing! Damn my asthma attacks!' I start looking for my inhaler frantically. 'Shit where is it!? I can't believe I'm going to die from laughing my ass off!' I fall to the ground. I'm too light-headed to stand. I can't breath. I can't think. My vision starts to go black on me. I'm not laughing anymore. I can't see Kate; I don't know where she is. 'Shit', I think, 'I pissed her off cause I was laughing! She must have ran out. Damn it! I'm seriously going to die. Damn! ....Wait. What the fuck is in my mouth!' Its Kate...with my spare inhaler from the bathroom. 'Thank you God! Thank God for Kate!'
Kate: "Breath damn it!", I hear her say. "Please Laur, breath God damn it!"
That's my Kate. Moody isn't she. She's just so colorful. I just love how she goes from majorly pissed off, to sweet and innocent catholic girl in a matter of seconds. I finally breathe in a huge gulp of air and I hear her breath out the breath she'd been holding for about the last five minutes with a huge sigh of relief.
Kate: "Thank God...I thought I'd lost you there for a minute Laur! I mean one minute your laughing your head off and the next minute you’re struggling to breath and running around like a chicken with its head cut off! I'm always warning you not to laugh so hard, but obviously you never listen....What the hell were you laughing about anyway?!'
My voice is raspy and it’s hard to speak but I manage to say, "You're so damn gullible Kate." I take two more puffs off my inhaler as she just sits there staring at me with this stupid blank look on her face.
After a very long silence she finally says something.
Kate: "What do you mean I'm "gullible"?!"
Laureileigh: "I mean you fall for everything...I still can't believe you believed me when I told you my boss said no...I mean the look on your face was priceless!" I chuckle a bit at the memory of what her face looked like. Then she gets up and starts to leave. "Oh c'mon
Kate don't be mad, you’re coming to the interview right?" She stands in my bedroom doorway for a long time more silent then she's ever been.
"Kate?".....then she muttered something just above a whisper...not quiet but just loud enough so I can hear her words and the cold, icy tone she speaks them in.
Kate: "Damn you Laureileigh! Damn you to hell!"
She leaves my apartment and slams the door on the way out, leaving me on my bedroom floor.
*end flashback*
In all the years I'd known Kate...not once had I ever seen her that angry before...I'd never heard her talk to anyone with the tone she had spoken to me in. She never knew how true her words would become. Neither did I...
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okay that's the end of chapter 1...me sorry but your gonna have to wait for the second chapter...i'm slow at writing...i had this on GWF and it did really well!! maybe i'll get the same response here....feel free to comment on this..[/b]
this took so long to write.....most of the first chapter is dialogue....that'll change probably....I think....I finally got it done though....I hope you all like it so here it goes...
I don't own MCR, Eyeball Records or anything in this chapter...the only characters I own in this chapter are the following: Laureileigh, Kate, Mr. Danvers....and maybe a few others.....I don't own anyone involved to MCR and if any of the names I use are the same they are completely accidental and nothing but a coincidence......I am using the guys of
MCR for the purpose of this story which is an MCR fanfic that I have written down on paper because I got the ideas straight from my own head....if any one of you readers steals this from me and I find out (which I will) there will be sever consequences and punishments.....if you wish to show/post this elsewhere....PLEASE ASK ME FIRST!!!! I would like everybody's feedback on this....whether it's a good comment or a bad comment....it's called constructive criticism and I love constructive criticism.....thanks again....now you may enjoy this wonderful creation from my crazy brain...
Rated: PG-13 for language
Chapter 1
*flashback*
"BLOODY HELL!", I say as I realize I've left my apartment key on my nightstand again, "That's the fourth time this week." I pull out my cell phone and dial Kate's number; pushing the green button I pray silently to myself she's home and not sleeping. One ring...two rings...'Please pick up Kate!', I say to myself...three ring...'Damn it answer your phone!' The fourth ring is cut short and I hear Kate say,
Kate: "Hey Laureileigh. What's up?"
Laureileigh: "Thank God your home Kate! Please come downstairs and let me in?! Its pouring rain and I've forgotten my damn key again!"
Kate: "Good God Laureileigh...not again! That's the fourth time this week!"
Laureileigh: "I KNOW! Now come let me in!"
I hang up on her. I see her coming down the stairs. 'Thank God for Kate!', I say to myself. She opens the door...holds it open for me and says,
Kate: "This is the last fucking time Laur!"
Laureileigh: "You said that the last time Kate. Do you really expect me to believe you?!"
Kate: "No I don't! I'm just hoping you won't forget your key again!"
Laureileigh: "What would I do with out you Kate?"
Kate: "Probably die from something unnatural."
Laureileigh: *sarcastic* "Ha ha, very funny!
Kate: "I was being serious!"
Laureileigh: "I know you were...that's why I was being sarcastic!"
Kate: "Bad day at work?"
Laureileigh: "Unbelievable!!"
Kate: "What happened?"
Laureileigh: " What didn't happen?!"
Kate: "That bad, huh?"
Laureileigh: " Why the hell did I become an accountant?!"
Kate: "I really don't know. Where are you working tomorrow?"
Laureileigh: "The radio station.........why?"
Kate: "No reason, I was just wondering."
Laureileigh: "LIAR!"
Kate: "Really...I just wanted to know."
Laureileigh: "Sure you were."
Kate: "Why do you think I'm lying?!"
Laureileigh: "Because you ask me the same thing every week, and I tell you the same thing every time!"
Kate: "I do not!"
Laureileigh: "Yes...you do! Every week its, "When are you working at the radio station?", and, "Please can I come with you this time!?", and I give you the same answer I give you now...NO!"
Kate: "I don't ask EVERY week."
Laureileigh: "You might as well."
Kate: "Please Laur? Please?"
Laureileigh: "No Kate!"
Kate: "C'mon Laur, you promised me you'd take me at least once, and I still have yet to even see the parking lot!"
Laureileigh: "God damn it Kate, no!"
Kate: "Laureileigh!"
Laureileigh: 'Great now she's whining!', "No Kate! End of story!"
Kate: "But Rei!"
Laureileigh: 'Not the nickname....anything but my nickname!', "Kate...NO! Don't bring nicknames into this 'cause it’s not going to work!"
Kate: "Rei-Rei...you promised!"
Laureileigh: "K-Kay...I don't care what I promised....your not going!"
I get the spare key from under my "Welcome" mat and unlock my door. I go inside and unfortunately Kate follows me. 'If looks could kill I'd be dead now!', I think to myself.
Laureileigh: "Kate, you know I love you like a sister but I can't just bring you with me unannounced. My boss would kill me. You know how he is."
Kate: "So....call him and ask him. I mean he said he owes you for taking all those extra shifts last month. Not to mention all the summer concert shows he's asked you to do this summer. I mean that's three months away from the office and Eyeball Records!"
Laureileigh: "Yeah well he's paying me triple what I make doing all three jobs in a month. I'll be able to pay the next two years of rent for this apartment. Plus, my car payments for the next year and a half.
Good God Kate I can't ask for anything better than having a roof over my head, and something to get back and forth to work. Not to mention all the fun I'll have at the concerts and all the bands I'll meet."
Kate: "Please Laureileigh?! I'll never ask for another favor for as long as we're alive!"
Laureileigh: 'Oh great the puppy face...I'm a sucker for the puppy face...especially Kate's!', "Fine Kate I'll talk to him! I'll ask...I'll beg...I'll plead with the man.....but only if you'll........." Ring...ring. '...Damn! Who the hell would be calling me at 2 Am.', "Hang on one sec Kate?!"
I leave Kate standing in the kitchen and go into my bedroom to answer my phone.
Laureileigh: 'Damn! Speak of the devil! Why oh why did I look at the caller ID...Now I have to pick it up.'
So I pick it up...sure enough it’s my boss from the radio station.
Laureileigh: "Hello....Yeah this is Laureileigh...Oh hello Mr. Danvers....No, I just got in sir.....Oh don't worry sir I'll be there tomorrow afternoon like always....I'll be fine sir...So what did you call for sir....Yeah I could come in, in the morning...10
o'clock....No that wouldn't be a problem sir....I'll be there a little early as usual sir....No really...Its my pleasure sir....Well actually I do have a favor to ask of you sir...If you don't mind could I bring my friend Kate to the station sometime?...Really!....Thank you sir...Oh she'll behave sir, I promise...Yes sir...Goodnight to you too
Mr. Danvers." 'Thank God that's over with!' "HEY KATE!?", I yell to her and as I figured she comes bounding down the hall.
Kate: "WHAT?", she hollers back while running to my room.
Laureileigh: "I got a surprise for you!", I say to her as she appears in my bedroom doorway.
Kate: "Oooo! Oooo! I love surprises! What is it? Who was that on the phone? ....Tell me! ...TELL ME!!
Laureileigh: "Chill Kate! Good Lord calm down so I can tell you....geez!"
Kate: "Well tell me already!"
Laureileigh: "Fine....That was Mr. Danvers...."
Kate: "Well what did he want?"
Laureileigh: "He asked me to come and interview some band tomorrow morning at 10..."
Kate: "...That's it! That's what the surprise is....That you have to go in early tomorrow to interview some stupid band... That's the reason I ran all the way down the hall...."
Laureileigh: "Kate?!"
Kate: "Yeah?!"
Laureileigh: "SHUT UP FOR ONE SECOND, WILL YOU!!!"
Kate: "Oops sorry Laur."
Laureileigh: "Thank you...I wasn't finished.....I asked him if I could bring you along to the station sometime and he said, "Why not bring her with you tomorrow and let her help with the interview!", I told him thank you and that I'd ask you so...What are you doing around 10 o'clock in the morning?"
Kate: "Oh my God! Absolutely nothing! ...So hell yeah
I'm going with you!!"
Laureileigh: "Just kidding! He said there's no way in
hell he'd ever let me bring you!"
Kate: "Now you're the one who's lying!"
Laureileigh: "No I'm not...he said no! Sorry Kate."
Kate: "What the hell did you go and get my hopes up for!?"
Kate just keeps on going on about how I'm such a bitch and how I should start being a better friend when all the time I'm thinking to myself how dumb she is and I'm trying not to laugh.
Laureileigh: 'Okay this is too funny! God damn, she's so gullible! Damn it I'm going to laugh. Shit I can't stay silent anymore!'
I start laughing. I'm laughing so hard my face is red and I know it.
Kate: "WHY THE HELL ARE YOU LAUGHING LAUREILEIGH! ITS
NOT FUNNY!"
The look on her face makes me laugh harder. Then all of a sudden I start feeling light-headed. 'Shit!', Is all I can think, 'I'm going to die laughing! Damn my asthma attacks!' I start looking for my inhaler frantically. 'Shit where is it!? I can't believe I'm going to die from laughing my ass off!' I fall to the ground. I'm too light-headed to stand. I can't breath. I can't think. My vision starts to go black on me. I'm not laughing anymore. I can't see Kate; I don't know where she is. 'Shit', I think, 'I pissed her off cause I was laughing! She must have ran out. Damn it! I'm seriously going to die. Damn! ....Wait. What the fuck is in my mouth!' Its Kate...with my spare inhaler from the bathroom. 'Thank you God! Thank God for Kate!'
Kate: "Breath damn it!", I hear her say. "Please Laur, breath God damn it!"
That's my Kate. Moody isn't she. She's just so colorful. I just love how she goes from majorly pissed off, to sweet and innocent catholic girl in a matter of seconds. I finally breathe in a huge gulp of air and I hear her breath out the breath she'd been holding for about the last five minutes with a huge sigh of relief.
Kate: "Thank God...I thought I'd lost you there for a minute Laur! I mean one minute your laughing your head off and the next minute you’re struggling to breath and running around like a chicken with its head cut off! I'm always warning you not to laugh so hard, but obviously you never listen....What the hell were you laughing about anyway?!'
My voice is raspy and it’s hard to speak but I manage to say, "You're so damn gullible Kate." I take two more puffs off my inhaler as she just sits there staring at me with this stupid blank look on her face.
After a very long silence she finally says something.
Kate: "What do you mean I'm "gullible"?!"
Laureileigh: "I mean you fall for everything...I still can't believe you believed me when I told you my boss said no...I mean the look on your face was priceless!" I chuckle a bit at the memory of what her face looked like. Then she gets up and starts to leave. "Oh c'mon
Kate don't be mad, you’re coming to the interview right?" She stands in my bedroom doorway for a long time more silent then she's ever been.
"Kate?".....then she muttered something just above a whisper...not quiet but just loud enough so I can hear her words and the cold, icy tone she speaks them in.
Kate: "Damn you Laureileigh! Damn you to hell!"
She leaves my apartment and slams the door on the way out, leaving me on my bedroom floor.
*end flashback*
In all the years I'd known Kate...not once had I ever seen her that angry before...I'd never heard her talk to anyone with the tone she had spoken to me in. She never knew how true her words would become. Neither did I...
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okay that's the end of chapter 1...me sorry but your gonna have to wait for the second chapter...i'm slow at writing...i had this on GWF and it did really well!! maybe i'll get the same response here....feel free to comment on this..[/b]